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On Wed, 2011-02-09 at 17:13 -0500, Marc Paré wrote:
> Le 2011-02-09 16:55, Marc Paré a écrit : > > Le 2011-02-09 16:01, Carl Symons a écrit : > > > >>> > >>> Re: BASE -- adding info on the backend. I have tried to move text > >>> around but > >>> there is just not enough space left. Should we just leave it as is? Can > >>> anyone add a short blurb on backend? That particular paragraph -- I > >>> think I > >>> can squeeze another 8 words in there. > >> > >> Try this... > >> > >> Now: > >> Base is a full-featured desktop database front end, designed to meet > >> the needs of a broad array of users. The front end is a powerful > >> asset adding major functionality and potential to the other > >> LibreOffice applications. > >> > >> Proposed: > >> Base is a full-featured desktop database, designed to meet the needs > >> of most users. It is a valuable asset for adding power to other > >> LibreOffice applications. Base can also be used as a front end to most > >> enterprise-class databases. > >> > >> Use and modify as you wish. I think this describes Base in a way that > >> captures its low AND high end uses. > >> > >> > > > > Looks good. That's exactly what we need! I'll have to edit it later ... > > running late for a meeting, unless someone else modifies this. > > > > Thanks for all of your help. > > > > Cheers > > > > Marc > > > > > > I just had time to update it. > Excellent - I guess you would not mind at all if we made a specific version for the show in California, a draft of a _first_ thought: http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x-pdf1_4.pdf I would want to pass this alteration to both our design folks and the scale folks also. Will drop them an email now and let them take a look, just to be sure they are cool with the logo usage, doubt they will, well hope they wouldn't. ALSO - I would like to regenerate all those png files with a full 300 dpi, sized as you now have in the document. I will do that later tonight and pass you back the odt file, ready for printing then IMO, and the new png files in a separate archive file. This is really nice! //drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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On Wed, 2011-02-09 at 18:00 -0500, drew wrote:
> Excellent - I guess you would not mind at all if we made a specific > version for the show in California, a draft of a _first_ thought: > > http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x-pdf1_4.pdf > > I would want to pass this alteration to both our design folks and the > scale folks also. Will drop them an email now and let them take a look, > just to be sure they are cool with the logo usage, doubt they will, well ahh - that was a typo - really just to be sure they are cool with the logo usage, doubt they will have a problem, well hope they wouldn't. was in the brain.. :-/ @Bernhard, Christoph, et al - let me know your thoughts on this show specific idea. Thanks to everyone in advance, Drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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On Wed, 2011-02-09 at 18:00 -0500, drew wrote:
> Excellent - I guess you would not mind at all if we made a specific > version for the show in California, a draft of a _first_ thought: > > http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x-pdf1_4.pdf > This is a second draft - the text has _not_ been updated since Italo's last feedback on the ML, Marc has the baseline for text. What I would like your attention on is a new graphic on the second page in the pdf, or as printed, the inside left panel. The updated file can be reviewed here: (it's a little bit larger file now 2.2 megs, 1.5 frmt now, with the new graphic generated at print resolution 300dpi) http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_a.pdf Anyway - let me know on this graphic only, ok. Particularly if anyone thinks that is too crowded. As you will see I've added the web and calc icons, along with a reprise of the mime sic application icons. I like it, but it might be getting a little busy, perhaps? Thanks much, in advance, for your time on this, Drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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Looks great. I don't think it will be too busy. The new graphic looks cool.
On Wed, Feb 9, 2011 at 5:46 PM, drew <[hidden email]> wrote: > On Wed, 2011-02-09 at 18:00 -0500, drew wrote: > >> Excellent - I guess you would not mind at all if we made a specific >> version for the show in California, a draft of a _first_ thought: >> >> http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x-pdf1_4.pdf >> > > This is a second draft - the text has _not_ been updated since Italo's > last feedback on the ML, Marc has the baseline for text. > > What I would like your attention on is a new graphic on the second page > in the pdf, or as printed, the inside left panel. The updated file can > be reviewed here: (it's a little bit larger file now 2.2 megs, 1.5 frmt > now, with the new graphic generated at print resolution 300dpi) > > http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_a.pdf > > > Anyway - let me know on this graphic only, ok. Particularly if anyone > thinks that is too crowded. > > As you will see I've added the web and calc icons, along with a reprise > of the mime sic application icons. > > I like it, but it might be getting a little busy, perhaps? > > Thanks much, in advance, for your time on this, > > Drew > > > > -- > Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] > List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/us/marketing/ > *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity *** > -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity *** |
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On Wed, 2011-02-09 at 18:00 -0800, Carl Symons wrote:
> Looks great. I don't think it will be too busy. The new graphic looks cool. > > > > > What I would like your attention on is a new graphic on the second page > > in the pdf, or as printed, the inside left panel. The updated file can > > be reviewed here: (it's a little bit larger file now 2.2 megs, 1.5 frmt > > now, with the new graphic generated at print resolution 300dpi) > > > > http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_a.pdf > > > > > > > > I like it, but it might be getting a little busy, perhaps? > > Hi Carl, Thanks. I did touch that graphic once more to open it up, by pulling the center icons outwards. More of an oval now, I like this a good bit more. - updated the pdf file at the URL above. //drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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Hi,
Well over an early coffee, I went ahead and merged Italo's comments into Marc's latest on the wiki, and added one more graphic - thought maybe an actual logo, the contemporary style might be nice, and it balances out the columns when opened wide, IMO. So draft 3 for the show specific pamphlet: http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_b.pdf @marc do would you want another odt file, or just the changed/added png files? Thanks Drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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Hi Drew, Marc, all
drew schrieb: > Hi, > > Well over an early coffee, I went ahead and merged Italo's comments into > Marc's latest on the wiki, and added one more graphic - thought maybe an > actual logo, the contemporary style might be nice, and it balances out > the columns when opened wide, IMO. > > So draft 3 for the show specific pamphlet: > > http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_b.pdf It's hard to keep in pace with you guys - great work! From my POV this pamphlet fits very well with the Branding Guidelines, so no need to change it. Nevertheless some thoughts... (you know me - can't admit that some work is just perfect ;-) ) You added the Web and Chart icons to the graphic on the second page. Why did you leave out Macro? I would not suggest to promote Writer/Web actively - it has not been worked on for years and I didn't hear any positive reaction during the same time. The Base icon on page 1 seems to be positioned slightly too low - leading to a fifth indented line, while all the other app's show four of them. I don't know if you want to mention Chart on the first page too - perhaps a problem of space. Speaking of "six feature-rich applications" directly below an image showing nine document icons looks a bit strange to me. Perhaps an image showing the 6 applications in a star-like positioning indicating their inter-relationship might be an idea... And one point to the text content: Under "The LibreOffice Project" (as "project" is a task leading to an end in my understanding I'd prefer "Community") there is more than twice as much text about the product as about the community - in fact, invitation to join us is the weakest position in the entire pamphlet IMHO (of course it's user-related, but showing them a way to be involved in a relevant way - possibly leading to better inclusion of their interests in community and product - might be important too). As said - no reason to modify the pamphlet: Just some input for the case you want to keep on working on it ... Best regards Bernhard -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity *** |
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Pamphlet looks great - particularly the positioning of the SCALE logo. It's
a good design that can be reused for subsequent events. I do agree w/ the comment that there are N logos, and the text references N - M products. It's not a show-stopper. Thanks! -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity *** |
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On Thu, 2011-02-10 at 08:12 -0700, Jeff Chimene wrote:
> Pamphlet looks great - particularly the positioning of the SCALE logo. It's > a good design that can be reused for subsequent events. > I do agree w/ the comment that there are N logos, and the text references N > - M products. It's not a show-stopper. > Thanks! > Hello Bernhard, Jeff, et al I was pondering that n-m ratio, graphic or text, either could change I suppose. Berhand's comment on the usability, usage level, of HTML functionality is a good one (*chuckling* a tale of file naming woes, if truth be out as to why it is _not_ the macro graphic ;-) so another pass to the mill for that graphic is certainly on the plate for todays fun and games. Also, his good eye on that darn Base icon white space - looked right at that and didn't _see_ it. Which is why the extra eyes help, no? So - back in a bit then with draft 4. Will push the ODG file for that graphic separately up to the wiki then, in addition. //drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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On Thu, 2011-02-10 at 12:22 +0100, Bernhard Dippold wrote:
> And one point to the text content: Under "The LibreOffice > Project" (as > "project" is a task leading to an end in my understanding I'd prefer > "Community") there is more than twice as much text about the product > as > about the community - in fact, invitation to join us is the weakest > position in the entire pamphlet IMHO (of course it's user-related, > but > showing them a way to be involved in a relevant way - possibly > leading > to better inclusion of their interests in community and product - > might > be important too). > > Hi Bernhard, Excellent points - I was of this broader question of who we see at this event, why we go and what we hope to accomplish. The conclusion that I keep running away from is that we need to different pieces - perhaps a common page 1 - different page 2. One piece, the current file I think fits for this one, would be targeted to individuals capable of deciding to use LibreOffice in preference to some other tool. This could of course be in respect to their person or in the role they hold within a group, such as a club or institution. The second should be looking for hackers - but not really hackers or to put a finer point on it, not looking for hacks, looking for competent help with core level software development tasks, first and foremost, and then in addition motivated contributors for the broader community activities, such as we are partaking in here. [task next for this weeks show prep? perhaps] Anyway - to answer your question from the previous email - yes it is still a good time for editing, it needs to go off to the printer sooner rather later over the next few days, but more for my sanity then printer deadline... no rush today. Ciao, Drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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On Wed, Feb 9, 2011 at 6:19 PM, drew <[hidden email]> wrote:
> On Wed, 2011-02-09 at 18:00 -0800, Carl Symons wrote: >> Looks great. I don't think it will be too busy. The new graphic looks cool. >> >> > >> > What I would like your attention on is a new graphic on the second page >> > in the pdf, or as printed, the inside left panel. The updated file can >> > be reviewed here: (it's a little bit larger file now 2.2 megs, 1.5 frmt >> > now, with the new graphic generated at print resolution 300dpi) >> > >> > http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_a.pdf >> > >> > > ... > >> > >> > I like it, but it might be getting a little busy, perhaps? >> > > > Hi Carl, > > Thanks. > > I did touch that graphic once more to open it up, by pulling the center > icons outwards. More of an oval now, I like this a good bit more. > - updated the pdf file at the URL above. > > //drew > > Drew, Marc, This looks nice. It would be helpful to incorporate all the goodies into an odt to be used at other events (ahem...LinuxFest Northwest). There are a couple of things here that the LibreOffice community could assist with. Mona is coming to the Fest from Portland (about 250 miles). She'll be paying something out of pocket to get here. I will be at the Fest as one of the Fest organizers and can support Mona with exhibit people. What else? 1. It would be helpful to the LibO cause to have presentations at LFNW. Is there a way for TDF to put out this call? I will also contact Mona through the Fest site, suggesting ways that she can do this with minimal effort. 2. It makes sense for the community to cover the cost of printing brochures, rather than putting this cost on people who are already pitching in to support LibO. Yes, there is a benefit to the individuals. However, the community receives the bulk of the benefit from more users and more exposure. And it's understandable that there are a bunch of things that need to be paid for. Any ideas about how this could work? Is there anybody on these lists who works for a company uses or will use LibreOffice, and would be willing to use a small part of the savings to pay for brochure printing? Carl -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity *** |
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On Thu, 2011-02-10 at 09:55 -0800, Carl Symons wrote:
> On Wed, Feb 9, 2011 at 6:19 PM, drew <[hidden email]> wrote: > > On Wed, 2011-02-09 at 18:00 -0800, Carl Symons wrote: > >> Looks great. I don't think it will be too busy. The new graphic looks cool. > >> > >> > > >> > What I would like your attention on is a new graphic on the second page > >> > in the pdf, or as printed, the inside left panel. The updated file can > >> > be reviewed here: (it's a little bit larger file now 2.2 megs, 1.5 frmt > >> > now, with the new graphic generated at print resolution 300dpi) > >> > > >> > http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_a.pdf > >> > > >> > > > ... > > > >> > > >> > I like it, but it might be getting a little busy, perhaps? > >> > > > > > Hi Carl, > > > > Thanks. > > > > I did touch that graphic once more to open it up, by pulling the center > > icons outwards. More of an oval now, I like this a good bit more. > > - updated the pdf file at the URL above. > > > > //drew > > > > > > Drew, Marc, > > This looks nice. > > It would be helpful to incorporate all the goodies into an odt to be > used at other events (ahem...LinuxFest Northwest). Howdy, Alright Draft 4: http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_c.pdf http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_c.odt http://baseanswers.com/libo/scale-front-page.odg Have made a number of changes per the last couple of responses. //drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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> > Alright Draft 4: > http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_c.pdf Darn if that Base paragraph on Page 1 still isn't wrong - it is a different spacing between the first two lines of text...arrrgh. Well at least it will be gone on the next turn of the wheel, finally - hopefully? :-/ //drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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On 02/10/2011 11:22 AM, drew wrote:
> On Thu, 2011-02-10 at 09:55 -0800, Carl Symons wrote: >> On Wed, Feb 9, 2011 at 6:19 PM, drew <[hidden email]> wrote: >>> On Wed, 2011-02-09 at 18:00 -0800, Carl Symons wrote: >>>> Looks great. I don't think it will be too busy. The new graphic looks cool. >>>> >>>>> >>>>> What I would like your attention on is a new graphic on the second page >>>>> in the pdf, or as printed, the inside left panel. The updated file can >>>>> be reviewed here: (it's a little bit larger file now 2.2 megs, 1.5 frmt >>>>> now, with the new graphic generated at print resolution 300dpi) >>>>> >>>>> http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_a.pdf >>>>> >>>>> >>> ... >>> >>>>> >>>>> I like it, but it might be getting a little busy, perhaps? >>>>> >>> >>> Hi Carl, >>> >>> Thanks. >>> >>> I did touch that graphic once more to open it up, by pulling the center >>> icons outwards. More of an oval now, I like this a good bit more. >>> - updated the pdf file at the URL above. >>> >>> //drew >>> >>> >> >> Drew, Marc, >> >> This looks nice. >> >> It would be helpful to incorporate all the goodies into an odt to be >> used at other events (ahem...LinuxFest Northwest). > > Howdy, > > Alright Draft 4: > http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_c.pdf > > http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_c.odt Is it "Macintosh" or "OS X"? IOW, two items are operating systems, one is a hardware platform. -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity *** |
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>> On Wed, Feb 9, 2011 at 6:19 PM, drew <[hidden email]> wrote: > On Thu, 2011-02-10 at 12:40 -0700, Jeff Chimene wrote: >> Alright Draft 4: >> http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_c.pdf > > Is it "Macintosh" or "OS X"? > >IOW, two items are operating systems, one is a hardware platform. > The later for consistency, yup - will do. err..or MS Windows, Mac OS X, GNU/Linux better - best? (Sauce for the Goose, sauce for the Gander, and such) //drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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On Thu, Feb 10, 2011 at 12:59 PM, drew <[hidden email]> wrote:
> > >> On Wed, Feb 9, 2011 at 6:19 PM, drew <[hidden email]> wrote: > > On Thu, 2011-02-10 at 12:40 -0700, Jeff Chimene wrote: > > >> Alright Draft 4: > >> http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_c.pdf > > > > Is it "Macintosh" or "OS X"? > > > >IOW, two items are operating systems, one is a hardware platform. > > > > The later for consistency, yup - will do. > > err..or > > MS Windows, Mac OS X, GNU/Linux > > better - best? > certainly better > (Sauce for the Goose, sauce for the Gander, and such) > Agreed. It's probably better to be as descriptive as possible, yet not descend into "version xx" detail, when producing these kinds of fliers. > //drew > -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity *** |
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On Thu, 2011-02-10 at 14:59 -0500, drew wrote:
> >> On Wed, Feb 9, 2011 at 6:19 PM, drew <[hidden email]> wrote: > > On Thu, 2011-02-10 at 12:40 -0700, Jeff Chimene wrote: > > >> Alright Draft 4: > >> http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_c.pdf Updated both the pdf and same named odt file with these, and a few other, changes - Draft 5 > > > > Is it "Macintosh" or "OS X"? > > > >IOW, two items are operating systems, one is a hardware platform. > > > > The later for consistency, yup - will do. > > err..or > > MS Windows, Mac OS X, GNU/Linux > > better - best? > > (Sauce for the Goose, sauce for the Gander, and such) > > //drew > > -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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Hola amigos,
http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_c.pdf Made, what I feel is a good set of final adjustments and edits - if you see something onerous yell, for myself I a comfortable with considering this one time use brochure, put to bed. Changes to 1st page, re-arrange applications for alignment - update to contact section. Second page - re-word second paragraph in document exchange section. The odt file, at the same address updated also. Will not put the scale specifc file to the wiki, after a day or two for last folks to check will remove and send to printer. Will drop a file less the scale logo to the wiki instead. @Marc, you seem the best o ask, where should I list the file for others to find? Best wishes, Drew -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
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Le 2011-02-10 18:19, drew a écrit :
> Hola amigos, > > http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_c.pdf > > Made, what I feel is a good set of final adjustments and edits - if you > see something onerous yell, for myself I a comfortable with considering > this one time use brochure, put to bed. > > Changes to 1st page, re-arrange applications for alignment - update to > contact section. > > Second page - re-word second paragraph in document exchange section. > > The odt file, at the same address updated also. Will not put the scale > specifc file to the wiki, after a day or two for last folks to check > will remove and send to printer. > > Will drop a file less the scale logo to the wiki instead. > > @Marc, you seem the best o ask, where should I list the file for others > to find? > > Best wishes, > > Drew > > Hi Drew: It should be listed in the Marketing-> Conference Kit wiki page. I am adding resources and examples of mods as they come up. Other conference teams should be able to see prior moded resources so that they can have examples to work with. It would be nice if you could reference the master pamphlet as well as the moded SCALE pamphlet as an example on that page. We need to make is as easy as possible for our teams to gear up for conferences so that we show up as prepared as possible for the public. BTW ... I sent you a note on the US list re: one adjustment to 2 words on the pamphlet. Cheers Marc -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [hidden email] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity *** |
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